hey you guys we need to put more details

needs lots of work but good pics

You have a lot of detail and information. You paragraphs are good sizes and your links go to a lot of different places; only two go to wikipedia. In the second paragraph with plants and animals it just list a lot of different animals, every sentence is about a different type of animal. You could add a little detail about them, like what they look like or something like that.

You have a lot of information and it's all accurate. Although it could use a few more links. I noticed that in the Animals and plants section you just listed a lot of stuff. I think you have really good detail through out the whole page, but esp. in the History section.

You could have had more pictures, like a bubble share

Hey Guys, The real strength in your page is the formatting. Your paragraphs are all a manageable length and the subtitles etc. are well chosen.

I think the weakness is that you could have had more content. Overall, there is a limited amount of information here. Another weakness is that there are a number of spelling errors on your page that could have been edited out.

Mr. F

Nice.... you guys had very good content in kid friendly language. And also had a lot of great formatting strengths. I did notice that there wasnt much content and you only had two pictures. I think you could have done a bit more. Overall, I will give you a 96. Great effort.

This was a pretty good post. You had good information, but not much of it. There are some grammar mistakes, too. If you just add a little more links and pictures, this would be a solid page. I would give you guys a 87 or a 3 from a
1-5 scale.

I'm surprised that lake baika is the largest lake in the world. I have always belived that it was lake michigan but I guess I am wrong. I found ot very interesting that it also is the oldest lake in the world that is what really made me want to keep reading on. Probably a thing that you should of worked on more is for a bubbleshare or more pictures to give me more of a visual insite on what it looks like. ( it's the largest lake in the world, what the hack does it look like .) The last thing that really caught my attension was your formatting and links. You had tons of external links and you had no problem with your subtitles so good system. Actually I noticed another problem with your page that needs to be fixed. You need to talk about how it influences the lives of the native people and what kind of a impact it has on russia. Yall had a fairly decent page and I feel you will strongly suceed.

Hey, you have a awesome topic with so many possibiltys, but I dont think yoou fully embraced that. So many topics were left unexplored. You could tlk about its importance to the Russian people, or its exports.
Kathleen

Wow, you guys' page is off the chain! I love the format and the pictures. I do think you could have add more info to your page. Your grammar and spelling was really good. In each of your subheadings you have a lot of info in each. Keep up the great work!
~Kelly C.

I notice that you had lots of good detail. Maybe you should add more also add some pictures and links to make it better. I would give this a 89. Good details.

You guys had ood information but you should have had more detail

u have good and strong iformation but you probably need more content because it really short.

hey guys! so im sorry if you're going to hate me after this but, you could have used more content. what you have so far is good enough but you still need more detail. Nice Job!